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Mysterious & Intriguing ... oh yeah
You've done a great job at creating a mood for me as a reader. I think you should watch out for grammer, and believe me I struggle with this myself when I'm in a creative frame of mind. I so enjoyed reading this and I am def. going to read on.
posted by
BahamaDave
on August 11, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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You have very skillfully intrigued the reader...
...into wanting more. Now, on to the next installment.
posted by
metalrat
on June 10, 2008 at 3:01 PM
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What a mysterious begining...
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 9, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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Very interesting!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on June 9, 2008 at 7:52 AM
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I am playing catch up after having such a crazy weekend..I will finish this tomorrow night..Great begining so far though!
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 8, 2008 at 11:11 PM
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