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I just like your smooth writing.

posted by C_C_T on June 7, 2022 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: look for it in a future segment, he promises her

He's already trying to get rid of her?

posted by adnohr on June 7, 2022 at 1:53 AM | link to this | reply

Don't know what to say so far....keep it coming.

posted by TAPS. on June 6, 2022 at 1:55 PM | link to this | reply

interesting indeed and looking forward to more. This guy much older and something of a womanizer young women, she better keep on her toes.

posted by Kabu on June 6, 2022 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

Great aunt Susie sounds a bit like my mother. I have learned through my years on this planet that all is not as it seems from the first glance. As for the turnout for this strangely mated couple, I suspect that you will add many twists and turns to keep us hanging.

posted by Sherri_G on June 6, 2022 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

look for it in a future segment, he promises her

the first condo on the moon.

posted by Pat_B on June 6, 2022 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

I'm not sure how this story is going to go but I look forward to reading every word.  

posted by Goldiec on June 6, 2022 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply