Go to Life in the fast lane--where's the on ramp?
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- Go to Patience - cont'd
Oh how the tide has turned...
posted by
Sherri_G
on May 30, 2022 at 10:13 AM
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Since I haven't been coming around too often, I read the whole thing in one sitting. Wow. I think you have been reading and thinking about the news happenings and people in charge and all that jazz way too much. You do make it interesting though.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 26, 2022 at 9:36 PM
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Good Afternoon
Pat, I like the end of your story. Finally, a group of women stopped the destruction and saved lives. It takes strong women to do something like this. It also takes women that have been pushed into a corner time and time again. I loved the way they came up with a plan and enlisted the help of others to see it through to the end. What the men will never understand is the fact that the women were trying to save the men from themselves. If they stayed on the same path everyone would be destroyed. The men will find a way to give credit to themselves.
posted by
Goldiec
on May 26, 2022 at 3:04 PM
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Re: CCT
You may have a point, CCT - dominance may well be what turns folks away from human concern for others. As you have seen, this short story is a rough draft and needs some editing. But first, coffee.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 26, 2022 at 7:58 AM
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Would it not be great if your story came true. Ever since creation, man has strived to annihilate those who differed from his way of life and beliefs. I suppose it is the same with Nature. I wonder would dominant females, if in power, would do differently. I feel Dominant is the key. 
posted by
C_C_T
on May 26, 2022 at 7:51 AM
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