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posted by Annicita on January 29, 2022 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Good evening

Yep, it would make for a peaceful environment. Just add a warm blanket, a cup of tea, and a good book to the mix, and you've got the perfect scene.

posted by Sherri_G on January 24, 2022 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

I find your poem to be incredibly soothing.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 24, 2022 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

. I hope your Muse has awakened. We need more like this to keep the old times ticking along. Oh! dear, I put tickling, but - Oh! say no more. Very soothing.

posted by C_C_T on January 24, 2022 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

I loved reading this delight. It is so descriptive and pleasant. And I think the cadence of the last line is simply brilliant! Well done.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 23, 2022 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

So clever! 

A few months ago, NPR ran a piece about My Grandfather's Clock... one of my very favorite songs when I was a child--maybe the first one I could sing! Turns out it was based on a real clock and a real grandfather!

posted by Ciel on January 23, 2022 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

Good Evening

Kabu, this is awesome!  It was so relaxing to me as I was reading it.  Thank you for sharing it.

posted by Goldiec on January 23, 2022 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed this. Reminds me of a quiet room with a good book

that, while your mind is so captivated by the story, the sound becomes "invisible" to the ear, but comes right back when you reach the happy ending. 

posted by Pat_B on January 23, 2022 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply