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Ren it is 5 syllables... stained has two syllables... thanks for reading me...

posted by Tremac on February 23, 2004 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

did you ever see your poem?  It is here if you want to see it.  It's not haiku.

POEM FOR KATRAY, REN3, OHBLANCA, SUUNYSIDEUP - 10 hours ago
BLOGGERS MENTIONED HERE MAKE IT TO THE TOP TEN-OH YEAH REN3!!! - I JUST...
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Posted by poetjpb on February 22, 2004 at 9:41 PM (link)

posted by Tremac on February 23, 2004 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

tremacc,

did you ever see your poem?  It is here if you want to see it.  It's not haiku.

POEM FOR KATRAY, REN3, OHBLANCA, SUUNYSIDEUP - 10 hours ago
BLOGGERS MENTIONED HERE MAKE IT TO THE TOP TEN-OH YEAH REN3!!! - I JUST...
On Blogging - Popularity rank: 105

posted by poetjpb on February 22, 2004 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Just so you'll know someone is reading your Haiku poetry, that first line is NOT 5 syllables-it's 4. But still nice.

posted by Passionflower on February 22, 2004 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

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