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Ren it is 5 syllables... stained has two syllables... thanks for reading me...
posted by
Tremac
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February 23, 2004
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tremacc,
did you ever see your poem? It is here if you want to see it. It's not haiku.
POEM FOR KATRAY, REN3, OHBLANCA, SUUNYSIDEUP - 10 hours ago
BLOGGERS MENTIONED HERE MAKE IT TO THE TOP TEN-OH YEAH REN3!!! - I JUST...
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Posted by on February 22, 2004 at 9:41 PM (link)
posted by
Tremac
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February 23, 2004
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tremacc,
did you ever see your poem? It is here if you want to see it. It's not haiku.
POEM FOR KATRAY, REN3, OHBLANCA, SUUNYSIDEUP - 10 hours ago
BLOGGERS MENTIONED HERE MAKE IT TO THE TOP TEN-OH YEAH REN3!!! - I JUST...
On Blogging - Popularity rank: 105
posted by
poetjpb
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February 22, 2004
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Just so you'll know someone is reading your Haiku poetry, that first line is NOT 5 syllables-it's 4. But still nice.
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Passionflower
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February 22, 2004
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