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Re: Good afternoon, 💁‍♂️ Sassy

Oh, you are in and from a military family. I can understand you found the poem to be 🧐 profound.

posted by anib on August 18, 2021 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Ciel

War is the last resort of a failed state. Correct. Thank you, Ciel. A sad and angry poem, indeed!

posted by anib on August 18, 2021 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, the soldiers are absolutely lonely despite being in a crowd.

posted by anib on August 18, 2021 at 9:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good Morning

Glad you liked this.

posted by anib on August 18, 2021 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

Being in and from a military family, I find this poem to be profound. Thank you for sharing it. losing your life during a battle is a horrible way to die. War is ugly and senseless, and he has detailed that well as only a good poet can do. 

posted by Sherri_G on August 18, 2021 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

What a sad and angry poem.Thanks for including the link. I recently read that war is the last resort of a failed state.

posted by Ciel on August 18, 2021 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

What strikes me about this is the loneliness of war. They're in battle together, yet they will be forgotten and not memorialized by those who remain.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 18, 2021 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

Thank you for sharing this!

posted by Goldiec on August 18, 2021 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply