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posted by
Tremac
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February 22, 2004
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HA HA... That's pretty good ms. POETJBP, lol. I really do appreciate it.
posted by
Tremac
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February 22, 2004
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FINALLY, YOUR POEM FROM POETJBP>>>WHEW!
NOT HAIKU
She spies a snake biting its own tail
stinging its own future and past
Chasing, chasing, half assed.
Hotel, motel, Holiday Inn,
Circuits acting up,
Will it be the end?
“Hello, anyone out there in TV land?”
And the walls come a tumbling’ down…
jpbrown poetjpb
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poetjpb
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February 21, 2004
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