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brilliant. An incredible story. Pat all these belong in a book. You are a world standard writer.
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Kabu
on March 4, 2021 at 3:24 PM
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brilliant. An incredible story. Pat all these belong in a book. You are a world standard writer.
posted by
Kabu
on March 4, 2021 at 3:24 PM
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Now that is right up there with Poe and King! Great job!
posted by
Annicita
on March 4, 2021 at 2:06 PM
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Pat, I am always amazed by your versatility and professional style in writing. What a gift - and how chilling this piece is. Good story.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 4, 2021 at 1:56 PM
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Pat, I am always amazed by your versatility and professional style in writing. What a gift - and how chilling this piece is. Good story.
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Sea_Gypsy
on March 4, 2021 at 1:56 PM
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Good Morning
Oh my goodness! I just figured it out. The Black Widow spider was his Mother-in-law. That is a scary thought! Now I remember the cousin bringing up the web. I wonder what it meant? This would be the perfect story for a sleepover. It would scare everybody. I hope Jared's soon-to-be wife is not a Black Widow too!
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Goldiec
on March 4, 2021 at 6:48 AM
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Omg! That is creepy. I am thinking that the spider that Jared stepped on was actually his future mother-in-law. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on March 4, 2021 at 6:21 AM
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