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posted by Annicita on September 24, 2020 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!  Both the words and the feeling a Mom gets seeing her offspring produce such art!

posted by Ciel on September 24, 2020 at 3:13 PM | link to this | reply

Occasionally folk do write poetry , I like this and I am sure you do.  Yes sometimes strange things happen perhaps the lady wondered if you were real as

it was like Heaven.

posted by C_C_T on September 24, 2020 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

I believe that I would have turned to look too to see if she were real.

Not many people have a vision such as hers. Nobody ever takes the time to enjoy the beauty surrounding them. The words from the poem are beautiful and spirited. I love it. 

posted by Sherri_G on September 24, 2020 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

Pat_B, I love this!  I was trying to pick out some words that I loved best but I have to say I love them all.  This is writing at it's best!  Thank you for sharing it! I hope you have a wonderful day!

posted by Goldiec on September 24, 2020 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply