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Al is a real prize catch.
His deplorable manners are so vivid that I can almost smell his rancid beer breath. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on September 24, 2020 at 7:57 AM
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Great writing! 
What did they do to Maureen?
Al is such a crude guy!
posted by
Goldiec
on September 23, 2020 at 3:01 PM
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Like your use of the present tense
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on September 23, 2020 at 1:24 AM
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Good Job.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 22, 2020 at 9:10 PM
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Good Job.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 22, 2020 at 9:10 PM
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