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posted by Annicita on July 14, 2020 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

If only they knew...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 14, 2020 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

Wan, kya baat kaha hai aapne.

A lovely philosophical poem. The best that one can give oneself,convinced that death is an absence and life, a presence.

posted by anib on July 13, 2020 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

Very good, up with events

posted by C_C_T on July 13, 2020 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks you all for your feedback & comments.The poem does talk about the uncertainty or even the surprise element of existence and if we truly understand it our attitude and outlook would radically transform. But mostly we are under the influence of this make -belief world...an illusion and allure keeps us in its grip.Living your life to the fullest is certainly the best day to day course.

posted by shamasehar on July 13, 2020 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

That's why the sap goes back down into the roots underground!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on July 13, 2020 at 3:26 AM | link to this | reply

Spot on

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on July 13, 2020 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Symbolically, there's a pretty snapdragon. Its growing in a crack between the bricks, of the balcony, on the side of the house. It shows determination to live its life. 

 

posted by BC-A on July 12, 2020 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Simply fabulous and a greatly enjoyable write! It spoke to me and I love it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on July 12, 2020 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

living one day at a time here.

posted by Kabu on July 12, 2020 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

Sassy nailed it!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on July 12, 2020 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

Death is always a shadow since we have no clue of our expiration date.

I try to live to the fullest each day despite that fact.

posted by Sherri_G on July 12, 2020 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply