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Re: Shamaji
Bilkul Sahi interpret Kiya hai aapne, bahut badhiya poetess jo hain.
posted by
anib
on May 10, 2019 at 3:11 PM
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The dream experience extends to reality....the soul bathes in the golden rays and awakens to a new dawn.Kuch aaisa hi keh rehe hain aap iss adbhut Kavita mein....
posted by
shamasehar
on May 10, 2019 at 10:40 AM
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Aba bro.
Thank you very much. 
Cheers!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 9, 2019 at 7:59 PM
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often
posted by
anib
on May 9, 2019 at 3:02 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba Brother - Yes, yes, it was quite clear...
I quite like your 'not just a character but it Fateh thinking and/ or reasoning to myself during the dream sequence'. That's the sign of someone who is elevated (expanded) soul. Wising you a quick covery to health to being 'hearty'.
posted by
anib
on May 9, 2019 at 3:00 PM
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Re: Re: Aba Brother - Yes, yes, it was quite clear...
Not all hale and hearty yet. In fact, I don't know whether I've ever been 'hearty.' lol. I'm feeling much better though. Have been battling severe bronchitis. Still coughing like a seal...
Yes, I understood exactly what you meant. It was beautifully clear. Perhaps I was unable to articulate my thoughts well in my comment, being ill, and having had a dream the night previous to your post that was - well, not quite along the same lines, but still otherworldly vivid. In my dreams I find I am often thinking and/or reasoning to myself during the dream sequence, not just a character in the dream. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 9, 2019 at 1:44 PM
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Thank you, FSI.
posted by
anib
on May 9, 2019 at 8:23 AM
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It feels so good.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 9, 2019 at 6:28 AM
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Re: Aba Brother
Are you hale and hearty .... I guess not, you aren't posting. Be well big sis, and if you are not up to the mark, please don't strain yourself to read.
God can be seen and felt, not with the eye but with eyes closed, in love, as in meditation. Furthermore, it is indefinable, the experience I mean. This poem in a dream explores the experience. Don't know whether I've been able to make it clear. 
posted by
anib
on May 9, 2019 at 5:38 AM
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Aba Brother
A most soothingly reassuring poem that was a pleasure to read - twice. Often we fail to notice signs, even when they are there in front of us. The sun has often been like a god to humans. Well done.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 8, 2019 at 10:04 PM
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Aba Brother
A most soothingly reassuring poem that was a pleasure to read - twice. Often we fail to notice signs, even when they are there in front of us. The sun has often been like a god to humans. Well done.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 8, 2019 at 10:02 PM
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Re: C C T
It is as if we are deaf or asleep when god comes acalling. But the reconciliation that I will now on spread my arms in welcome well before the sunbeams (the path shower) hit the barns. God has so many times been our guest but unawares, we go on missing Him.
posted by
anib
on May 8, 2019 at 12:02 PM
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Well I read it three times a poem like this is of course rather personal as one can imagine
how dreams twist and submit one to the brink of a anticipated catastrophe. Release as always is soothing. Not what you meant probably.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2019 at 10:05 AM
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Re: Hi Corbin
i must admit that I too am not much of a poet. I find myself more fluent on prose. But when someone like you appreciate my poetry, it sure does gladden me.
posted by
anib
on May 8, 2019 at 8:00 AM
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I am not big on poetry, when I do read something that grabs my attention, I must point out that I liked it...
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on May 8, 2019 at 6:54 AM
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