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This is a really good poem. I enjoy the concept you have conveyed and the manner in which it was conveyed. Good job!

posted by RPresta on January 18, 2019 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Heavenly dreams

posted by BC-A on January 18, 2019 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

Love it!

 

posted by Ciel on January 18, 2019 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

Good one..brought out a chuckle or two!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on January 18, 2019 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

Good on you Taps. I am sure your dignity is preserved as you probably snore sweetly. I stick a little patch on my nose at night as i don't want to wake the neighbors.

posted by C_C_T on January 18, 2019 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

That's a very cute poem...My parents do a whole lot of snoring.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 18, 2019 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

I love this Thank you

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on January 18, 2019 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes my mind grabs onto what the speaker is saying, and

vines around the words and sentences, leafing out ahead to predict the next line in the monologue, delighted when there's a happy branching out to something unexpected. And sometimes it pulls away from the pontificating and thou shalt nots to meander along a mountain stream from long ago and far away. 

posted by Pat_B on January 18, 2019 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

I like it. The peace of being still.

posted by adnohr on January 18, 2019 at 1:39 AM | link to this | reply

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