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This is a really good poem. I enjoy the concept you have conveyed and the manner in which it was conveyed. Good job!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 18, 2019 at 7:35 PM
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Heavenly dreams
posted by
BC-A
on January 18, 2019 at 3:21 PM
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Love it!
posted by
Ciel
on January 18, 2019 at 11:27 AM
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Good one..brought out a chuckle or two!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on January 18, 2019 at 8:03 AM
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Good on you Taps. I am sure your dignity is preserved as you probably snore sweetly. I stick a little patch on my nose at night as i don't want to wake the neighbors.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 18, 2019 at 6:40 AM
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That's a very cute poem...My parents do a whole lot of snoring.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 18, 2019 at 5:52 AM
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I love this Thank you
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on January 18, 2019 at 4:49 AM
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Sometimes my mind grabs onto what the speaker is saying, and
vines around the words and sentences, leafing out ahead to predict the next line in the monologue, delighted when there's a happy branching out to something unexpected. And sometimes it pulls away from the pontificating and thou shalt nots to meander along a mountain stream from long ago and far away.
posted by
Pat_B
on January 18, 2019 at 3:39 AM
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I like it. The peace of being still.
posted by
adnohr
on January 18, 2019 at 1:39 AM
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