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Re: BC-A

Clever way to think of it. Thanks.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 24, 2018 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you for your kindness. You have heart and a soul; therefore, you have a lot of poetry inside you. It's hard to write when one is exhausted, worried, busy and has no time, darling. They poems are there. They will be heard.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 24, 2018 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

It's like a poem unplugged. Excellent.

posted by BC-A on October 24, 2018 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

I am always humbled by your talent. Sadly I do not seem to have a poem left inside me.

posted by Kabu on October 24, 2018 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, that might be so, but most would rather not do so. And that's fiine.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 24, 2018 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Corbin

Thanks, Corbin. At least it did finish... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 24, 2018 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shams

It takes the soul of a poet to know this. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 24, 2018 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Well RP I have read much worst published. I feel this is rather sad in a way.

As though as we all do have high expectations until we soul shift

remaining true on the perimeter of living, but an ache remains.

Well I won't go on for the next half hour, just feel a little proud of

that something inside you that rises star-like amongst the role of living.

posted by C_C_T on October 24, 2018 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

Yes. Everyone has poetry within themselves. They just have to release it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 24, 2018 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

It was a good finish.........

posted by Corbin_Dallas on October 24, 2018 at 4:11 AM | link to this | reply

Anew, absolutely, we are the poem

See the Bowl of Saki for today...

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on October 24, 2018 at 1:49 AM | link to this | reply