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The trip was well worth it...This has me thinking of Icarus.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 14, 2018 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

So, everything turned out cool.

posted by BC-A on October 14, 2018 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

And it was a long time until we flew through the heavens again.....

posted by Corbin_Dallas on October 14, 2018 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply

That is the trouble with wings, if we had them we would probably fly much too high.

Although most would not get off the ground. The poem is indeed a modern approach.A bit thin on the ground poetry these days at least you are keeping the site going,with material worth reading.   

posted by C_C_T on October 14, 2018 at 3:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu dear - oops!

i didn't realize both versions were posted. Thanks for the feedback, and here I thought Icarus reference might be too much. lol. It's most appreciated, sweet lady.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 13, 2018 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

dear Presta.

Both beautiful perhaps I like the reference to Icarus in the first one.

posted by Kabu on October 13, 2018 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply