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Re: BC-A

Interesting concept. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 9, 2018 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

Memories are prose in themselves love.

posted by BC-A on October 9, 2018 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Corbin

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 9, 2018 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you. That's true, and I did consider many other words for that last word, but stayed with "white." 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 8, 2018 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you so much. I appreciate all of your nice comments, and it's good to dare to dream once in a while, I think.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 8, 2018 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello, dear brother, Aba!

Finally, you are back! I'm so glad to see you have returned. Days without sleep...that's just too much for anyone. Do rest up and revive your spirit so you will feel well. Thank you for reading. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 8, 2018 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

You really put a lot of work into this.....

posted by Corbin_Dallas on October 8, 2018 at 1:28 PM | link to this | reply

There is something incredibly pure about the color white. Great use of color.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 8, 2018 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

This is a sweet poem, an uplift for anyone who would dare to dream.

posted by C_C_T on October 8, 2018 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, dear big sis, Presta

I must say "sorry" for not having read or written anything for so long. There have been days I had to go without sleep. The work pressure was at its peak. It was a wonderful cöming back to read your poem, so nicely done, and so refreshing for my spirits. 

posted by anib on October 8, 2018 at 1:30 AM | link to this | reply