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This dilemma of life's sudden realization is presented very truly; the lengthening of the age, time, is accompanied by a gradual shortening of the breath. I loved the decor and the arrangement of your poem. I'm 
posted by
anib
on August 5, 2018 at 11:12 PM
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My darling Soul S. I cannot tell you how this hit me. The older i get the more i miss the friends and relatives who are gone before. most of my girlfriends died way too young. I sometimes feel that I am left here to live on for us all.
posted by
Kabu
on August 5, 2018 at 1:34 PM
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This describes our inner struggle very well...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 5, 2018 at 6:40 AM
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I guess you are right RP. We only pass this way once. Some memories are probably one's we could wish were not always so persistent.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 5, 2018 at 6:08 AM
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Smooth.......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 5, 2018 at 4:18 AM
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