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posted by
poetjpb
on February 15, 2004 at 9:44 PM
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Great idea about having a catch or hook at the beginning.
posted by
christinadanderson
on February 15, 2004 at 5:28 PM
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HEY WILEY
I'M NOT SURE I EVEN KNOW WHAT THIS ONE MEANS BUT IT WAS AN EXPERIMENT REALLY. LOOK UP THEODORE RHOETHKE. I HOPE I SPELLED THAT RIGHT. HE HAS SOME GARDEN POEMS, DIRT POEMS I GUESS. I WAS SORT OF IMITATING.
posted by
poetjpb
on February 13, 2004 at 10:49 PM
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Poetjpb,
alright, Hi and here goes. That's a birds nest with one greedy little sucker in there grabbing all the food from mummy so none of the others get it. Aw, I just love your poetry 'cause it makes me stop, look, read, re-read, think, and then write and tell you I admire the heck out of you and your deep mind and clear eye.
How close am I!?
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 12, 2004 at 10:39 PM
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