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Re: C_C_T

Thanks, CCT! I'm glad. (Again, no emojis on this computer. I'm sorry.) 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 20, 2018 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thanks, FSI. (No emoji's from this computer, I'm sorry.)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 20, 2018 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

Yes writing in the first person is quite nice for the duration of the poem. This one works through it quite nicely, you do have soft hands.

posted by C_C_T on April 20, 2018 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

And I am sure he will grab it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 20, 2018 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu - Yes, I understand...

Thank you for saying that. I changed it back to how I originally had written it, S.Sister. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on April 20, 2018 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

sometimes, I reach my hand out like that on a Summer's night, I miss some people so much.

posted by Kabu on April 20, 2018 at 8:35 AM | link to this | reply