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Re: Kabu
I suppose it is a bond and very painful when broken after so much sacrifice.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:59 AM
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Re: Pat
Well there is no need to tell of what one would wish, love your examples though.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:58 AM
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Re: RPresta
Thank you RP. I guess we all wish we knew more at the time.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:56 AM
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Re:FS
Good advice FS. It is like sliding into the right groove.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:55 AM
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Re: overtherainbow
Rather sad Jean. Some are not capable, at least your children love you. Thankyou.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:53 AM
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Thank you Kat, glad you think so.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 9:50 AM
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Both poems are excellent, CC!
Nothing compares to holding your newborn for the first time; my experience also..:)
posted by
Katray2
on March 22, 2018 at 8:38 AM
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loved both poems, i fear the only love i have known was for my children and them for me. but you have known many kinds of love i think to write these lovely poems.
posted by
overtherainbow
on March 22, 2018 at 7:22 AM
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I feel most, if not all of us, need to feel loved by someone. It helps keep us going...One can feel the loneliness in the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2018 at 7:11 AM
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You have taken the indescribable and described it. Well done, indeed. Most couldn't attempt to do that. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 21, 2018 at 7:16 PM
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Love is so many things, like facets on a cut diamond, or
branches on a tree or the water dancing in spring warmth as it melts off a glacier in the mountains - your ability to channel and describe it's variety often surprises me.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 21, 2018 at 3:57 PM
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that love when you hold your baby for the first time...I never knew anything could be that good that worth working for.
posted by
Kabu
on March 21, 2018 at 12:17 PM
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