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Re: Pat

Oooh! This is so good! I love it!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 21, 2018 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Pat

I'll catch up later. Just sayin' hi. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 21, 2018 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

you just keep me enthralled. I found myself before she died that she should be gone safe and sound.

posted by Kabu on March 21, 2018 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

A job to keep folk engrossed in stories on here, but you have done so with this interesting play of action between both characters. Well done.

posted by C_C_T on March 21, 2018 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

A few minutes can make all the difference in the world...I am curious to see what it was that made George decide to turn himself in.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 21, 2018 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Very good......where are we headed now?

posted by Corbin_Dallas on March 21, 2018 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

Nice, pulled me right in....

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on March 21, 2018 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply