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Re: BC-A

 Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 12, 2018 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. Better not fly too often then. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 12, 2018 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 12, 2018 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

It happens.

posted by BC-A on March 12, 2018 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

Yes I guess I have felt like that . A clever poem. Trouble is if I tried to fly I fell over. 

posted by C_C_T on March 12, 2018 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

I have known of a few who have drifted apart.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 12, 2018 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu - most definitely...

This is a way to read it for sure. My girls go their own ways also, as did I.

It's so open-ended it can be read many ways. So many that I had several in mind, and wrote two versions. I got the idea, the seeding, the inspiration, from watching actual birds fly.  Thank you, sweet lady. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 11, 2018 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

i can see several scenarios for stories from these words. As a mother perhaps i see the pain of setting your male baby off onto his life as a man to experiences his mama cannot follow.

posted by Kabu on March 11, 2018 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply