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Re: Re: First two blogs

posted by Kabu on February 11, 2018 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: First two blogs

Hi Kabu, many thanks for your encouraging responces. Rick

posted by RickFlint on February 11, 2018 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

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At first I thought it was symbolic of a woman, struggling and losing to her emotion. And then, I concluded at least for myself that this paragraph poem's indeed about a ship. There can be a lot in a paragraph poem. It happens in this one. I felt a spirit of poetry. Good.

posted by BC-A on February 9, 2018 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

yes quite imaginative.

posted by C_C_T on February 9, 2018 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

great start keep writing and small entries are easy to read. I will be back.

posted by Kabu on February 9, 2018 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply