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Aba Brother
I knew what you meant by your last line, dear Aba; a collective "man" - as in humankind, formerly mankind. LOL! I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist. It's a great poem, and most importantly, the meaning is pure, and good and true! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 30, 2018 at 10:34 PM
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Coming from someone like you I consider it an honour. Thanks so v much Sir
posted by
anib
on January 30, 2018 at 8:39 PM
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Well you have the gift of writing and an intellect far greater than most, thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 30, 2018 at 10:19 AM
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Re: C C T
Thanks C C T, I'll keep that in mind and try to write what is popularly accepted. Perhaps I need to change the language.
posted by
anib
on January 29, 2018 at 9:46 PM
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Yes it is good it just takes a bit of getting ones mind around the perspective The trouble is Abba the public want easy, I hope you will write more good luck.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 29, 2018 at 9:56 AM
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Think and not thought.
posted by
anib
on January 27, 2018 at 9:15 PM
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Re: Kabu
The last line's 'man', I did thought of, that does it contain gender orientation? I reflected that the I thought no, it doesn't, because man is a general term used for mankind as a whole. What it means is that man must first discover his self, and when he is able to do so, only then does he realize that the self or the soul is the representative of the Self or the Supersoul, God Himself. Thank you for pointing that out, and am glad you find it Wonderful!
posted by
anib
on January 27, 2018 at 9:14 PM
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Wonderful. I too will ignore the last gender mentioning line...LOL I believed that when I reached a certain sensible age that I would become sedate wisdom filled and perhaps be able to temper the thoughts within and my effervescent love for all of God's creations...some humans aside... But I remain about six years old in my heart.
posted by
Kabu
on January 27, 2018 at 8:08 AM
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Re: Aba Brother
Thank you, and I take your compliments humbly. Somehow poetry writing is attracting me nowadays but I have to yet mature. 
posted by
anib
on January 26, 2018 at 11:34 PM
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Aba Brother
Indeed, dear Aba, how true! We must look within, find our peace, and be messengers of goodness and light. I do love this. I won't even make a comment about the last line and it's gender orientation. LOL! It's too good of a piece, and I know what you mean. Well, done, li'l bro! So nice.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 26, 2018 at 10:51 PM
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