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Re: Re: adnohr
posted by
adnohr
on November 20, 2017 at 9:27 AM
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Re: Again there's that wistfulness in the tone of your 2nd poem, and
Thank you Pat . Sometimes as near to life as dammit.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 20, 2017 at 6:44 AM
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Re: adnohr
You bet, one day I might find out the tally. I think if she had suggested two it might have tickled his fancy.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 20, 2017 at 6:43 AM
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Wow - all three of them, each with a different message. Was it her desire for 10 children that changed Uncle Albert's mind?
posted by
adnohr
on November 19, 2017 at 12:56 PM
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Again there's that wistfulness in the tone of your 2nd poem, and
the kind attempt at a breakup in the 3rd. I do enjoy reading your poems.
posted by
Pat_B
on November 19, 2017 at 10:32 AM
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Re: RPresta
No he does not like to brag about it, I must try one day to find out if the dream came true or if the reality caught up with the dreamer.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 19, 2017 at 9:27 AM
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Re: Oh, I love the rhythm and rhyme of the first poem...
Well Pat it is somewhat easier to write when the poem suggests its own words to complete something that makes a little sense. Bizarrely a lot of nursery rhymes do not follow this procedure as often as they should have done. Of course at this instant I cannot think of an example. Hope you have luck.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 19, 2017 at 9:25 AM
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Re: FS
It was true FS. Not my choice though.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 19, 2017 at 9:15 AM
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That is some good advice...She wants to have a lot of kids there!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 19, 2017 at 9:06 AM
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Oh, I love the rhythm and rhyme of the first poem...
We're talking of doing poetry in our Thursday class, and this would be a great demonstration tool. Will be back to read the other two, my boys have invited me to breakfast and time's a-wasting.
posted by
Pat_B
on November 19, 2017 at 5:43 AM
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C_C_T
It's nice to be nice. That's for sure. So Uncle Albert wrote a Dear Joan letter to someone? Never knew that...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 18, 2017 at 9:08 PM
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