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Where have you been, grandma?
posted by
ohBlanca
on March 1, 2004 at 7:38 PM
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bestwriting, thank you for stopping and reading and commenting.
I think that I may just go back to trivial blogging and leave the book writing for my private life.....thanks for the encouragement.
posted by
benzinha
on March 1, 2004 at 7:37 PM
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Good
Very Good. I love it... Keep it coming.
posted by
bestwriting
on February 29, 2004 at 1:50 PM
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decshak, yes, I'm changing things around in each rewrite, undecided
about how scary or criminal my behavior should be as I try to get through the experience of finding the heroin....testing testing testing ideas in rewrites......sorry.
posted by
benzinha
on February 23, 2004 at 12:21 AM
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Very nice.
You wrote in the Feb. 10th post that you'd be carrying the heroin across the border to Tuscon and then didn't in today's post. Was that intentional?
posted by
WindTapper
on February 22, 2004 at 6:52 AM
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Benzinha
The suspense in your character's heart and voice is tangible. I think it is coming along nicely.
posted by
beachbelle
on February 18, 2004 at 3:11 AM
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Benzinha my dear
The weekend is approaching when I can settle in with my tea for a good read....during the week I must read for work rather than pleasure
posted by
beachbelle
on February 13, 2004 at 3:48 PM
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lSammy Jean, thanks for reading my ever revised book opening. I'm grateful
that you see these attempts as separate chapters. I should just write chapters and see how they all go together when I do the final shuffle. Thanks again for reading me. AND for taking the time to comment.
posted by
benzinha
on February 13, 2004 at 3:27 PM
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Another Chapter
I really enjoyed reading your work. It reads like it will be a good book. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
FoxyBlue
on February 11, 2004 at 8:02 PM
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