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Re: Re: Barry Lee Jones - Forgot

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 22, 2017 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Barry Lee Jones

Thank you so much, Barry! May I call you Barry? I can understand writing multiple drafts. Glad you enjoyed the poem, cery much.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 22, 2017 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

That's why I do multiple drafts. I loved the poem, though.

posted by Barry_Lee_Jones on October 22, 2017 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: JessieE

Glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much. I appreciate hearing it, very much.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2017 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Kabu

Thanks, dear Soul Sister! Yes, I understand. I tried to show how some of us arrive at the point where we write the words down into thoughts and they become stories or poems. At times the mind is like a stream. and then a river. flowing on and on, and that's okay if we forget where it started; it's where it ends that counts! Many thanks.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2017 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

KALEIDOSCOPE OF EMANCIPATION

I love it! Author! Wonderful! The best candy could not taste so sweet!

posted by JessieE on October 20, 2017 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

I was trying to say that the flowing was so real because that is exactly what my thoughts do. Just flow on like a stream...my problems is that the mind flows on and forgets where it started from.

posted by Kabu on October 20, 2017 at 4:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you very much.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2017 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Yes, it's a lot that might go on in the mind of someone who writes, but a bit much to read online. Oh, well... Sorry. Glad to hear you liked it though. lol. The

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2017 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

What a wonderfully soothing poem, I find this to be. I hope that your cousin has a wonderful birthday.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 20, 2017 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! a lot to take in,but intriguingly perceptive,I like it a lot.

posted by C_C_T on October 20, 2017 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Many thanks to you

Thank you!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2017 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Many thanks to you

No need also to do much either, sis, but give your eyes the much-needed rest.

posted by anib on October 19, 2017 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Many thanks to you

Thank you, Aba brother! I'm very glad you liked it. I can't do much right now.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2017 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

Loved it all through

The flow of the imagery is in perfect sync with the thoughts as also the usage of words invests the poem with a lasting beauty. Very well-done big sis Presta.

posted by anib on October 19, 2017 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: shelly_b

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2017 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: shelly_b

I'm sure I will!

posted by shelly_b on October 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: shelly_b

I bet you can write poems. You are lucky that you have the tenacity to write stories. I'm not a true poetess; this is about those who are real writers, as is my cousin. I am a teller of stories, and it's time I started to do so. My second blog is coming... Hope you like it.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2017 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

I wish I could write poems. I never could! I guess I will stick to fiction. lol

posted by shelly_b on October 19, 2017 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, but yes, it is loaded with run-ons...LOL! Still, it' supposed to do that, as it's a possible insight into the mind of some writers before the words become concrete. Many thanks, dear S. Sister.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2017 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

No,Bill, but thank you. This is about what could be in a writer's/poet's mind, the thoughts and words.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2017 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

a poem like a river flowing, just beautiful.

posted by Kabu on October 19, 2017 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

So, you've turned your eye issue into a poetic experience. I did with my toe in 2000 love.