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JessieE/Victor

I enjoyed all of these very much. The first one is so like one I have written and not posted, it is surprising, and it is a touching poem. The ones where she looks through him almost are touching. Brings back thoughts of people I saw but didn't know that well. Then later when I got to know them, it was as though I had missed out by not doing so sooner. Great work, imho.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 30, 2017 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

CCT is of course correct. Tis a lazy lot who live here!! and your work is so good it should be read by us all. xx

posted by Kabu on September 30, 2017 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice Jenny ,personally I find that one poem receives better reviews than a collection. A few words describing the reason why one was inspired always helps. Only my opinion of course.  

posted by C_C_T on September 30, 2017 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply