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- Go to Where are you? CARNAL and CHURCH are 1&2 of one poem..
Yes quite good to read,well done.
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C_C_T
on September 6, 2017 at 10:27 AM
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Vic's Poetry by JessieE
Is there a 3 or 4, or more? All good to read. I liked the use of soul vs. sole; = same thing at times. Also wont and want is interesting. And the pick... The last line of the last one is deepest. 
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Sea_Gypsy
on September 5, 2017 at 9:30 PM
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