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I am very curious to see where your story goes...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 26, 2017 at 11:32 AM | link to this | reply

It is sadly realistic , but you have solved a problem that worried me, The taking of liquids which I saw reacted by an old nurse and I often thought why not a little drink not a frenzied sucking of the swab. We all come to it eventually.

posted by C_C_T on July 26, 2017 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Kabu,

What a beautifully written story.  I do hope you continue it.

posted by Amanda__ on July 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

As one who's lost someone in lingering misery, this is gut wrenching.

As a writer, I'm bowing to your ability to blend the graphic factual details with the metaphysical ones. Well done, Kabu!  

posted by Pat_B on July 26, 2017 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

That is a sad little story, but so true. My sister-in-law died a few months ago and it reminds me of her. 

posted by mariposa75 on July 25, 2017 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Oh, my dear, sweet Kabu, a sad tale it is, but so well-written. Dear friend, my poem today is a poem of hope, and though each person reacts differently to a particular piece of poetry, I was saying that no matter how low or sad one feels, how bad it is, somewhere inside comes the strength to make it out of the tunnel of despair into light and love. Or rather, I was trying to say that... At least that's one way to read it.

I thought, when you said you were inspired to write a story, it would be about how, after all you have been through in life, you made it into to light by finding your Wiley, and your life now. Dear Soul Sister, please don't plan on leaving us for a very long while. That's the story, the story of you and Wiley, I would like to see you write, sweet lady.

posted by RPresta on July 25, 2017 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

Extra, Kabu! The emotion evoked by these simple, realistic words is extra. GREAT writing!

posted by adnohr on July 25, 2017 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I don't like this story either! But the fact that you're still typing on your keyboard tells me appearances may be a bit deceiving...

posted by Nautikos on July 25, 2017 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

what???  I do not like this story... 

posted by -blackcat on July 25, 2017 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

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