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Re: Re: Re: Re: Aba Brother भाई to Presta बहन that is sis

'Switch', then all the better! Let it be so

posted by anib on June 25, 2017 at 4:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Aba Brother भाई to Presta बहन that is sis

Hah! Now that's a switch!Just show me the right word, please! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba Brother भाई to Presta बहन that is sis

Frankly, I was not familiar with this Hindi word, but checked and found it means to be one in consent. Another variation is to be born of the same womb. So thank you for teaching a new word. 

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Nautikos - And...

You may be pleased to know a family member made the identical comment that you did about this "poem." LOL! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba Brother भाई

Thank you, Aba सहोदर! (Is that correct?) Yes, it is my way of playing with words. But silly, indeed. I appreciate your perceptions, but not difficult once explained. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Okay, Kabu dear! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Thanks, Wiley. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thanks, Bill. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thanks, FSI. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Okay, CC. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 24, 2017 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Sent.

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

computer

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Sorry my copy is playing up ... Cut that of

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic, the twist in forever and a day, which according to poetic license is fully justified, as it is followed by the operating sense, 'could'. These are the depths of sensitivity, diffcult for a man of materialistic understanding. So, a Kudos from me . Of 

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic, the twist in forever and a day, which according to poetic license is fully justified, as it is followed by the operating sense, 'could'. These are the depths of sensitivity, diffcult for a man of materialistic understanding. So, a Kudos from me . Of 

posted by anib on June 24, 2017 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Since 'forever and a day' makes no sense, it's quite possible a declaration vowing to love you 'until that day' is just as meaningless... 

posted by Nautikos on June 24, 2017 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

I will let you know when that day arrives dearest 

posted by Kabu on June 24, 2017 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I'd say yes certainly to that love.

posted by WileyJohn on June 24, 2017 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

Yes in my thinking love.

posted by BC-A on June 24, 2017 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

I would like to think so.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 24, 2017 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

I expect more than most, RP. one needs nourishment etc.

posted by C_C_T on June 24, 2017 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply