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Re: Re: PP

Thanks for reading!

posted by mesmerized1970 on July 1, 2017 at 12:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: PP

details

posted by anibanerjee on June 27, 2017 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

PP

Well written, good in detatls!

posted by anibanerjee on June 27, 2017 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

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thanks for your feedback! I'll definitely take that into consideration

 

posted by mesmerized1970 on June 24, 2017 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

I think the story is great but I personally would start with the paragraph about that night

posted by Annicita on June 24, 2017 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks for the feedback

posted by mesmerized1970 on June 22, 2017 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

A well written story, you managed to cram a lot into the first chapter, interesting.

posted by C_C_T on June 22, 2017 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

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