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such a lump you brought to my chest. More hugs lil Bro.

posted by Kabu on June 1, 2017 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

Mr. Raysongs, the promise is there every day. I found out it's easy to critique work in writing classes, and you where else? In blogs of the obnoxious. I couldn't attend your story fast enough. Do you know why. I realize I think you're a nice man too much. And I'm impressed by you, being a musician. Oh well.

posted by BC-A on June 1, 2017 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, well told and poignant .

posted by C_C_T on June 1, 2017 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Raysongs

Outstandly poignant. Brings a tear; this is an undying love and so gently and hauntingly told. Wow! Bless you and her...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 31, 2017 at 11:29 PM | link to this | reply