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Re:Sister Presta

Oh thank you so much dear sis for revisiting. You carry your li'। bro along, no wonder! 

posted by anibanerjee on June 2, 2017 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Aba Brother

Just revisited, and liked it even better the second time around! I wrote one or two with a similar ending, though not as beautiful. Just lovely, Aba. 

posted by RPresta on June 2, 2017 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by Kabu on May 28, 2017 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you and a warm welcome, GypsyButterlyCA

That comment was profound. Here in the poem, it is the cluster of stars up there distant and gathered as if together in communion, discussing on the plight of man. 'But for us could they have known space and . . . '. It is man's destiny to be always delightful but he invariably makes it otherwis, eternally unenjoyable. This is the irony I meant. Thanks again.

posted by anibanerjee on May 27, 2017 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Are they creations of God’s delight, or displeasure

We all start off as delightful & that's how He continues to see us. Intentionally or no, we sometimes make choices that cause us (or the situation) to be displeasing. To ourselves or others. We are all God's children. Once we're all able to view ourselves & more importantly, others that way, we will always be delightful.

posted by GypsyButterflyCA on May 27, 2017 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Many thanks 

posted by anibanerjee on May 27, 2017 at 5:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C C T

Thank you sir, would that we knew the answers 

posted by anibanerjee on May 27, 2017 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on May 27, 2017 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

A really thoughtful poem would that we knew the answers. Belief is the wisest I would imagine.

posted by C_C_T on May 27, 2017 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: GoldenMean

I like your structured and thoughtful comments GM. Indeed, that is what should be, invariably be.Cheers 

posted by anibanerjee on May 26, 2017 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

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You say, whatever you say, with such purity of the heart that your comments leave me admiring you. So, I am nt thanking you. 

posted by anibanerjee on May 26, 2017 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you ma'am TAPS

posted by anibanerjee on May 26, 2017 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba bro says big sis, Presta

posted by anibanerjee on May 26, 2017 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba br

I loved your 'I keep losing my comments redoing them, Rrghh!'So natural. I am not much into poetry, but enjoy doing them sometimes. I enjoy more reading yours, they flow and the mood swings convey a lot, backed with a spirit so joyfully enthusiastic. So backgrounder, your appreciation is much appreciated. 

 

 

posted by anibanerjee on May 26, 2017 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent expression of a doubtful mood, comtemplating the stars and the state of humanity.  Folded in doubts, we are, indeed!!  Any thinking person should have doubts,  but the best of those doubts should hold the seeds of new thoughts, new ideas, new research, new experiments, new adventures.....  with a determination to resolve those doubts one way or another. 

posted by GoldenMean on May 26, 2017 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

everlasting doubts!!! As I get older my doubts are less disturbing... and frequent. Could that be because I hope or trust...see doubts are still around. Actually lying on my back and looking at the stars has always rather scared me.It is so humbling. I am nothing, nothing, less than an ant living, my all important to me, my Nano second of time here on earth.

posted by Kabu on May 26, 2017 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

Very special!

posted by TAPS. on May 26, 2017 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

Aba brother, teacher, guru

This is so lovely. And written with thoughts that seem universal. Everlasting doubt. Beautiful. Will revisit. I keep losing my comments and redoing them! Rrghh! 

posted by RPresta on May 26, 2017 at 12:56 AM | link to this | reply

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