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Re:Sister Presta
Oh thank you so much dear sis for revisiting. You carry your li'। bro along, no wonder! 
posted by
anib
on June 2, 2017 at 11:21 PM
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Aba Brother
Just revisited, and liked it even better the second time around! I wrote one or two with a similar ending, though not as beautiful. Just lovely, Aba. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 2, 2017 at 10:56 PM
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posted by
Kabu
on May 28, 2017 at 7:01 PM
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Re: Thank you and a warm welcome, GypsyButterlyCA
That comment was profound. Here in the poem, it is the cluster of stars up there distant and gathered as if together in communion, discussing on the plight of man. 'But for us could they have known space and . . . '. It is man's destiny to be always delightful but he invariably makes it otherwis, eternally unenjoyable. This is the irony I meant. Thanks again.
posted by
anib
on May 27, 2017 at 9:19 PM
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Are they creations of God’s delight, or displeasure
We all start off as delightful & that's how He continues to see us. Intentionally or no, we sometimes make choices that cause us (or the situation) to be displeasing. To ourselves or others. We are all God's children. Once we're all able to view ourselves & more importantly, others that way, we will always be delightful.
posted by
GypsyButterflyCA
on May 27, 2017 at 6:21 PM
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Re: Annicita
Many thanks
posted by
anib
on May 27, 2017 at 5:58 PM
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Re: C C T
Thank you sir, would that we knew the answers 
posted by
anib
on May 27, 2017 at 5:57 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on May 27, 2017 at 3:54 PM
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A really thoughtful poem would that we knew the answers. Belief is the wisest I would imagine.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 27, 2017 at 10:08 AM
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Re: GoldenMean
I like your structured and thoughtful comments GM. Indeed, that is what should be, invariably be.Cheers 
posted by
anib
on May 26, 2017 at 10:33 PM
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You say, whatever you say, with such purity of the heart that your comments leave me admiring you. So, I am nt thanking you. 
posted by
anib
on May 26, 2017 at 10:30 PM
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Thank you ma'am TAPS
posted by
anib
on May 26, 2017 at 9:12 PM
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Re: Re: Aba bro says big sis, Presta
posted by
anib
on May 26, 2017 at 9:11 PM
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Re: Aba br
I loved your 'I keep losing my comments redoing them, Rrghh!'So natural. I am not much into poetry, but enjoy doing them sometimes. I enjoy more reading yours, they flow and the mood swings convey a lot, backed with a spirit so joyfully enthusiastic. So backgrounder, your appreciation is much appreciated. 
posted by
anib
on May 26, 2017 at 9:10 PM
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Excellent expression of a doubtful mood, comtemplating the stars and the state of humanity. Folded in doubts, we are, indeed!! Any thinking person should have doubts, but the best of those doubts should hold the seeds of new thoughts, new ideas, new research, new experiments, new adventures..... with a determination to resolve those doubts one way or another.
posted by
GoldenMean
on May 26, 2017 at 5:10 PM
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everlasting doubts!!! As I get older my doubts are less disturbing... and frequent. Could that be because I hope or trust...see doubts are still around. Actually lying on my back and looking at the stars has always rather scared me.It is so humbling. I am nothing, nothing, less than an ant living, my all important to me, my Nano second of time here on earth.
posted by
Kabu
on May 26, 2017 at 12:18 PM
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Very special!
posted by
TAPS.
on May 26, 2017 at 5:13 AM
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Aba brother, teacher, guru
This is so lovely. And written with thoughts that seem universal. Everlasting doubt. Beautiful. Will revisit. I keep losing my comments and redoing them! Rrghh!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 26, 2017 at 12:56 AM
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