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Re: Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Of course you are! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 25, 2017 at 9:36 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
just a little saintly soul sister...tee hee
posted by
Kabu
on May 25, 2017 at 8:03 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Dear Kabu, you always have such nice and kinds comments, and that is why you are just so great! Many thanks, friend and S. Sister. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 25, 2017 at 1:15 PM
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Re: Annicita
Glad you liked it, Annicita. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 25, 2017 at 1:14 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Thanks, Lanetay. I hope it does.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 25, 2017 at 1:14 PM
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Re: JennyHeart
Thank you, Jenny. That's such a nice thing to say about it winning a contest. I appreciate that so much. Hope your tests come back well.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 25, 2017 at 1:13 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
and that is why you are such a great Poet.
posted by
Kabu
on May 24, 2017 at 5:57 PM
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lovely poem...i like how you have one word before each section
posted by
Annicita
on May 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM
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sounds promising
posted by
Lanetay
on May 24, 2017 at 9:09 AM
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There is somthing very reassuring about this poem, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 24, 2017 at 8:06 AM
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One of a kind I meant
How do I edit mistakes? The comment I made had a mistake on the subject
posted by
JennyHeart
on May 24, 2017 at 2:37 AM
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One of Thisa kind
This poem made me feel what true love victims of death feel. This could win contests!
posted by
JennyHeart
on May 24, 2017 at 2:36 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you, CCT. I appreciate your comments very much. I never know what will bring on an attempt at poetry, apparently, even myths... :)
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 24, 2017 at 1:09 AM
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Quite poetical RP. Wonderful to be touched by a myth and bring it to life again.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 24, 2017 at 1:03 AM
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Re: Nautikos
Thank you, Naut! If one is going to foray, I suppose it's probably best to do it sumptuously. lol. As I mentioned below, I was fascinated with the myth of Cyane dissolving from/into her tears, and this poem was the result.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 24, 2017 at 12:08 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
That makes me feel good to hear, Chuck. Thank you so much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:59 PM
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Re: shelly_b
Thank you, Shelly.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:58 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, Bill. Very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:57 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you so much, S. Sister. The mythic story of Cyane dissolving away with her tears, intrigued me; touched me and this poem was born, as I told Aba. I never know how they will be...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:55 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Wiley, thank you for you kind words. You have the gift, and your words are always there for you to write. I see it every time you post. Go for it!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:52 PM
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Re: Aba
You liked it then? LOL! Such an high comparison, and I do like that poem, E and R. Cyane dissolving with her tears fascinated me, and thus was born the poem. How kind you are but I am not worthy; 'poetess' is perhaps attainable one day... 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 23, 2017 at 11:49 PM
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Beautifully evocative with ringing passionate pleadings, like Expostulation and Reply. Let me crown you as queen poetess, dear Sis, Presta
posted by
anib
on May 23, 2017 at 11:34 PM
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RP
A sumptuous foray into ancient mythology...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 23, 2017 at 9:12 PM
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I love your poetry
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 23, 2017 at 6:56 PM
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posted by
shelly_b
on May 23, 2017 at 5:48 PM
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Beautiful words that speak with a silver tongue.
posted by
BC-A
on May 23, 2017 at 5:25 PM
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How beautiful dear S. Sister. I love the comfort this brings, making bearable when a beloved dies.
posted by
Kabu
on May 23, 2017 at 2:37 PM
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RPresta
You will find him in all the places you loved, I had kind of a dream that appeared last night that left me with feelings for a poem I certainly can't write as beautifully as your poem.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 23, 2017 at 2:32 PM
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