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Re: Aba Brother Dear

It was nice while it lasted, but they are back with a vengeance. Perhaps in time it will be resolved. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 22, 2017 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Kabu

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 22, 2017 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

posted by Kabu on May 22, 2017 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

From turmoil to the tranquil. The ending is with a fine note in prayer that the sound of silence prevail. Wow, I'm happy for you dear sis Presta. 

posted by anib on May 21, 2017 at 9:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Yes, I'm so grateful for that respite. There are people working on trying to fix it, even in the courts, as I mentioned, but meanwhile... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: shelly_b

Oh yeah, I get it! There's also a military base close by, just to add to the fun. Especially when they are practicing maneuvers, in helicopters... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

I understand that. Many in my family enjoy quiet. And then there are the others... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

I don't see that happening. We just moved here barely over a year ago. But I've learned never to say never...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Correct you are! I think that was part of it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thanks, Kabu dear! They started back up today. We'll see how tomorrow goes. Yes, S & G were great, and I DO remember their concert in the park. :) 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thanks, CCT. I'm certain their answer would be, "Well, the planes have to go somewhere."  It's about money, and compressing flights into a smaller flight path to save on air traffic controllerss, I think. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

You got it right! Welcome to my world... Thank you, FSI. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Jenny Heart

Oh, thank you so much, Jenny. That's very sweet of you and I appreciate it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 21, 2017 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

RP

A respite is nice - maybe someone is even working on something more permanent...

posted by Nautikos on May 21, 2017 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Silence is a blessing until those darn Military helicopters (by the threes) fly over my apartment.  

posted by shelly_b on May 21, 2017 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

I thrive on silence...always have even as a child.  I loved being in the woods by myself and just experiencing it and singing where no one else could hear me.  I think it is because I grew up in a big family with a little house.

posted by TAPS. on May 21, 2017 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Is moving a possibility ??

posted by WileyJohn on May 21, 2017 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

it could be all the storms are effecting flights ... no air traffic without electricity

posted by Annicita on May 21, 2017 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

praying for it to be permanent and I adore the way you have told this...and S&G....weren't they just the greatest and remember their concert in the park...?

posted by Kabu on May 21, 2017 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

Prayers are answered or someone with influence lives under the last flight path.

You should send this to the powers that control flight. A good idea to write it out of your system, in a sweet and gentle manner.  Have you anything on chainsaws.  

posted by C_C_T on May 21, 2017 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply

Reading this, I get the sense of peace and tension combatting one another. The peace comes from the silence, the tension from the thoughts of whether or not it is going to end.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 21, 2017 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

One of a kind

This poem is exquisit! The poem made me think thought provoking thought, so I say excellent creative writing.

posted by JennyHeart on May 21, 2017 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply