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I like showing the essence of the person (or in your case, the non-human animal) in my writing as well...I would say that there are bears with different traits.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 22, 2017 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

. No good writing it on here or no one will want to buy it. That's the bear I mean the bare truth . Anyway it is a good mental exercise and I an sure it will come into fruition The mill grinds slowly, but it grinds fine , i could never understand the significance of that saying..   

posted by C_C_T on March 22, 2017 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

I'm glad you are still going on it.  I'm reading a book now where it seems half of the writing is telling what each person is wearing.  That seems a little unnecessary to me.

posted by TAPS. on March 22, 2017 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

It's best to let your characters decide or they kick up quite a fuss!

posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

I think good dialogue is essential for a characters development. Also, bears are a lot smarter than we think!

posted by shelly_b on March 21, 2017 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I would rather read good character description and dialogue than padding describing how green is my valley... lol. I'm sure Bruno is going to be a hit and I can't wait to read it all.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 21, 2017 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

I think the development of a character is better when it's about the character and not the what it wears and so forth! Your sam I am 

posted by sam444 on March 21, 2017 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

of course bears must all have their own personalities... Yogi and Boo Boo come to mind... LOL

Image result for yogi and boo boo

posted by -blackcat on March 21, 2017 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie;-)

Great photo's love and this story will be another winner for you. I love you.

posted by WileyJohn on March 21, 2017 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply