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that's how it goes in the real world

posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

We get a little more insight with each post! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 21, 2017 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

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thank you taps....I keep thinking I am almost finished but then the story takes a twist...my characters insist on it!

posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

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For me it is more difficult to write a rhyming poem and thank you so much for the compliment

posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

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since he was returning in just a couple of days they didn't bother

posted by Annicita on March 21, 2017 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

wondering if that 'plane ever got off the ground!

posted by Kabu on March 20, 2017 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

That is a nice little exchange there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 20, 2017 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

You get quite a bit into your shorties.  They leave a solid picture in the mind.

posted by TAPS. on March 20, 2017 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply

Good writing, I tell you A it is difficult to do this off the cuff,

posted by C_C_T on March 20, 2017 at 1:47 AM | link to this | reply

Hmm? Maybe they shoulda asked where he went? lol. Or are they going to catch him at the airport? I'm guessing now...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on March 20, 2017 at 12:47 AM | link to this | reply