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This is genius in writing, type of poem, and design. Bill
posted by
BC-A
on March 2, 2017 at 9:55 AM
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Thankyou for your feedback!
1st. By copy an paist I Loose the true Lay out.
2nd. I Greatly respect you all as writer's. (Thanx for reading )
3. As you can see. I Will post segments before I have done a thorough final edit.
4. All thoughts and or Ideas are most helpful.
David.
posted by
manawar
on March 1, 2017 at 11:17 PM
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I found this to be very intersting and the layout intriguing! sam 
posted by
sam444
on March 1, 2017 at 8:12 PM
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manawar
This would read well, spoken, which is what a poem should do. I like line about "...ate of Satanic bait."
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 1, 2017 at 2:40 PM
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Re: it scares Me?
My Message Still needs final edit ...True! But Within imperfection I Still feel Good to post to you.
posted by
manawar
on March 1, 2017 at 10:02 AM
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It scares me, takes some writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 1, 2017 at 8:58 AM
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