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gome, thanks, I'm so busy starting the book that I'm not actually writing
it as yet. I should just give the start of it up and go on with the rest. Thanks for your kind comments.

posted by benzinha on February 13, 2004 at 3:25 PM | link to this | reply

Geez Benzinha--I wish you could post more
Your posts are simply too few and far between but I fully understand the the time constraints. I always enjoy reading your stuff.

posted by gomedome on February 11, 2004 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

beachbelle, thanks for reading another try at writing.....tea is good.

posted by benzinha on February 10, 2004 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

majroj, I tried another start to the book, see new post. However,
last night I dreamed a more dramatic opening and will try it out on the BN later this week. In the meantime, I write more and research more about what I'm trying to speak about with authority in the book. Looking up all of my saint's research from years past. Thanks for reading.

posted by benzinha on February 10, 2004 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

Benzinha
I like this new draft. I will be replying on the other front. My tea keeps getting cold as I keep being called away.

posted by beachbelle on February 10, 2004 at 2:13 AM | link to this | reply