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I marched and I demonstrated all peaceful but all the more powerful for being peaceful...that was back long time gone.

posted by Kabu on February 16, 2017 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

Have you marched? your imagery makes me think you did

posted by Annicita on February 16, 2017 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

Very fitting for these times.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 16, 2017 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Spiderfly

💬Your background’s interesting. The poem captures the essence of a modern woman love. BC-A, Bill’sR👀st

posted by BC-A on February 16, 2017 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent and powerful poem; Kudos, Spiderfly!

posted by Katray2 on February 16, 2017 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

i wrote it when the marches were happening last month.  i had friends marching in the us and in europe. it is wonderful when woman come together and march like that.

 

posted by spiderfly on February 16, 2017 at 2:09 AM | link to this | reply

soiderfly

I really like this poem. It has the flavor of US protests over the war in Vietnam Nam and protests drafting our boys to send then away. Love the line about no wonan weeping on a carpet soiled with judgments.. A good write, imho. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 16, 2017 at 1:44 AM | link to this | reply

because her hands are sore from strife and she wants them to be soft when she touches

 

posted by spiderfly on February 16, 2017 at 1:33 AM | link to this | reply

Yes very emotive strong poem, but why does she need that jungle juice on her hands.

posted by C_C_T on February 16, 2017 at 1:21 AM | link to this | reply