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Re: WileyJohn

Thank you very much for reading and for your comments, Wiley. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Oh, thank you, Bill. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2

I appreciate that, and thank you, Katray2. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you, sam. It's something I rarely do, as if there was a taboo on it. I forget, sometimes it's good to break the rules, or rather, there are no rules at times. :) 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

You are too funny, dear Kabu! Seeing you and Naut in agreement is so great! I also thought it would be great fun, because I also had seen a movie at the theater when I was 5, and I remember pyramids and treasure from that! But on the real dig it was hot, and one stayed out in the dust, baking. You helped so many in nursing, and still do. How great is that? 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thanks, Naut! I had a beautiful book about all about archeology when I was about 9, and my dad took me, along with two others, on a nearby dig when I was 15. It was all very interesting, but I do remember being hot, dusty and thirsty! I observed. Still, a fun thing to experience. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: spiderfly

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: spiderfly

Hello! Yes, they can do that. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

It is the answer to a riddle. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re:teddypoet52

Why, thank you, teddy!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

Yep. You're closer than you think, Lanetay! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you for reading, CC. Nice to be back. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba

Thank you, and it makes sense. A good explanation, I think. I did read it on your post finally. Sorry for the delay. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello Aba

Yes. Good job. It is esoteric. Thank you, Aba. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 11, 2017 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

I love how you opened the poem! It really sets the stage but it also lets the reader know there is history although we are not privy to it! That makes it more engrossing because the reader can actually become part of the poem and have their own history! Well done! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 11, 2017 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

i hate agreeing with our friend Nauticos but his answer is the same as mine. In the end I went nursing!

posted by Kabu on February 11, 2017 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Great poem! It also reminds me - when I first read about Mycenae (my Dad had a couple of books about it) I wanted to become an archeologist...

posted by Nautikos on February 11, 2017 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Intriguing beauty

posted by WileyJohn on February 11, 2017 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

wise thoughts find answers

 

posted by spiderfly on February 11, 2017 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

wise thoughts find answers

 

posted by spiderfly on February 11, 2017 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by BC-A on February 11, 2017 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

A nice little riddle to share with us.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 11, 2017 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Marvelous, RP..

posted by teddypoet52 on February 11, 2017 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

makes me think of the lyrics of the Drifters Sweeter than wine, softer than the summer nights

posted by Lanetay on February 11, 2017 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Well nice to see you back RP.  I guess they never had saccharine, I give up on the lion.

 Cute little poem, explanation is really good.  

posted by C_C_T on February 11, 2017 at 2:16 AM | link to this | reply

Deep and well done, RPresta!

posted by Katray2 on February 10, 2017 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on February 10, 2017 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

You had asked the other day why the collective desire in Man's quest for the divine. It is because we were once a part of that divine, and now have traversed a long path since. Suppose you lose something that was once yours, only then will the disire to find it will arise. That, I believe, answers, collective yearning. 

posted by anib on February 10, 2017 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Presta

Ok, let me attempt ..... Love is sweeter than honey .... Courage is stronger than a lion ... All said ....  lies in the esoteric is the final word. So I leave it at that. Good job! 

posted by anib on February 10, 2017 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply