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Excellent as always.. Yes I reread...

posted by teddypoet52 on April 1, 2018 at 9:36 AM | link to this | reply

So much time..

Seems naught but a moment...

posted by teddypoet52 on January 11, 2018 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

🏁

posted by teddypoet52 on December 9, 2017 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Fo is go

posted by anib on February 9, 2017 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Indeed, this is real poetry

This, Katray, is simply beautiful . . . and done with the dexterity of word felicity, all that fo on this invest your poetry with an oter-worldly quality. 

posted by anib on February 9, 2017 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Everybody for the wonderful comments!

posted by Katray2 on February 8, 2017 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

So beautifully written and sensitively written. Few seem to remember the topic. Well done with such beautiful imagery and word choice. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2017 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

I love how you chose the words in your poems  Great work!

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on February 7, 2017 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with CCT! This is awesome imagery! I saw your comment about the mindless military and I apologize because I should have known better! Just a little too defensive when it comes to my soldier son! So sorry! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 7, 2017 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Starkly emotive Kat. Would that words would heal or change the cruelty of man.

posted by C_C_T on February 7, 2017 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re:

One possitive today, Bison have been reintroduced into parkland here in Canada. So happy.

posted by Kabu on February 7, 2017 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

yes but we can change what we do to mother nature

posted by Annicita on February 7, 2017 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

Very vivid imagery and very fitting for the times we find ourselves in.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 7, 2017 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply