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Swagatam
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on December 3, 2016 at 1:54 AM
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Re: Time to share more wisdom, Brother (Mere bandu Bhaisahib Bharat Desh se)
O, meri UKu behen, aapka yeh kehna mujhe bahut sweet laga
you are an angel, dearest.
posted by
anib
on December 2, 2016 at 9:23 PM
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Time to share more wisdom, Brother (Mere bandu Bhaisahib Bharat Desh se)
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on December 2, 2016 at 6:34 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
Am glad for your visiting 
posted by
anib
on November 29, 2016 at 8:56 PM
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Re: FSI
Intensity invariably becomes felt when criticising something senseless.
posted by
anib
on November 29, 2016 at 8:55 PM
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Re: Shobanaji
Well said, and I am glad you had fun 
posted by
anib
on November 29, 2016 at 8:53 PM
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Re: Shamji
Machchar ko aisa Karne me maza aa raha tha
posted by
anib
on November 29, 2016 at 8:52 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 29, 2016 at 7:50 PM
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The reader can feel the intensity of emotions.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 29, 2016 at 10:08 AM
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Wow, truly fantastic and how in the world could the Man not see that he is equally dangerous to the mosquito..an excellent poem Aba on the senseless dangers that befall even the innocent!
posted by
shobana
on November 29, 2016 at 4:30 AM
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Well said. To use your words.. "bit rather deep and tight"
posted by
shamasehar
on November 29, 2016 at 1:10 AM
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Re: Aba
Thanks a ton ... 'Acerbic wit' that was a good word usage, dear PResta.
posted by
anib
on November 28, 2016 at 10:28 PM
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Aba
I loved it, dear Aba! A message so many fail to hear... Well said, well put, and a delight to read. Thank you, and I enjoyed the lightest touch of acerbic wit to it also.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 28, 2016 at 10:22 PM
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Re: Oh Kabu, I can't thank you 'nuff
That you were enthralled and delighted passes on to me too, LOL.
posted by
anib
on November 28, 2016 at 8:39 PM
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Re: Justi
I am so glad you liked the poem. Thank you ever somuch 
posted by
anib
on November 28, 2016 at 8:37 PM
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Dear Shelly
Absolutely delete gated now that you wil be here.
posted by
anib
on November 28, 2016 at 8:35 PM
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Re: 'Religionists And we do enjoy the kill' - tells me not Mosquitos r on your
Shalom, and Suprobhat here in India. Not the mosquito, more so it was the mosque in my mind! and the Madarsas where the poison of hatred is taught right from childhood. it was the bald gent from Kent with a grassless patch who is not a true religionist but a disruptionist. All those who kill in the name of Jehad and think all but themselves, as Kafirs, are the ones that indulge in senseless killings of the innocents. They are killers in the name of religionists. Am I clear, dear?
posted by
anib
on November 28, 2016 at 8:32 PM
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A lot of truth in this one! How have you been? sam
posted by
sam444
on November 28, 2016 at 7:27 PM
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'Religionists And we do enjoy the kill' - tells me not Mosquitos r on your
mind. Quite a wonderful poem ... but I must read again to get the depth of the setting (Golden Gate to where?) ShalomShalom - Shubha raatri sahib
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on November 28, 2016 at 5:35 PM
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absolutely enthralled. Stunned and delighted. There really isn't anything to say. One either understands it or not.
posted by
Kabu
on November 28, 2016 at 11:23 AM
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Nice poem very interesting.
posted by
Justi
on November 28, 2016 at 11:18 AM
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