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Re: TAPS
Thanks, TAPS, but it's quite paltry compared to real poets. I had tossed most of it. I'll bet you have a wonderfully beautiful collection.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 21, 2016 at 1:37 AM
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You must have a great collection in your vault.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 20, 2016 at 9:32 PM
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Re: shobana
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 20, 2016 at 10:49 AM
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Oh dear, I guess it was love lost - Nothing so bitter as cheating in love.
posted by
shobana
on November 20, 2016 at 4:52 AM
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Re: shamasehar
Indeed.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 7:57 PM
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Its best to move on.
posted by
shamasehar
on November 19, 2016 at 7:49 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you, dear Kabu. Agreed.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:53 PM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
You read it right.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:52 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Yes, thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:52 PM
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Re: FSI
Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:50 PM
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Re: Aba
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:50 PM
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Re: Aba
Thanks, Aba. Glad you liked it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM
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She is doing the right thing.
posted by
Kabu
on November 19, 2016 at 1:11 PM
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Life moves on for both of them 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 19, 2016 at 6:40 AM
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Rather fatal to change one's mind. I don't think many women would forgive that action.
Also I don't think he would deserve to be given another chance, I suspect it would happen again. Of course it is easy to say that. It's life and you recorded it passing.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 19, 2016 at 6:28 AM
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I like that ending. It strikes me as the process repeating itself.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 19, 2016 at 5:29 AM
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Oh, I missed out on those - 'he walked over to another' and later, 'she walked over to another'.
posted by
anib
on November 18, 2016 at 11:33 PM
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Hello Presta,
What a passionate and yet full of pathos, this poem of yours is. I loved the triangular aspect, or was it even quadrangular or more shifts there? Anyway, in this case it does not matter as highlighted by the merciless tear rolling down his trimmed beard.
posted by
anib
on November 18, 2016 at 11:06 PM
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