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FSI

Thank you FSI - happy to hear that

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 5:03 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu

That would have been too wonderful - we would probably be chuckling to ourselves trying to figure Hans Christan Andersen and his mystics.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:59 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Thanks so much CC - happy you liked it.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Thank you Presta. I would love to share some of what I studied of him and his style of writing and what inspired him. We read up on the Red Shoes and yes it is unlike any other fairy tale. HCA had a penchant for writing fairy tales that are mythical and mysterious with a dark side to it. Right now we are doing "Little Mermaid" :)

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

Wiley John

Thank you Wiley John

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Chuck

Thank you Chuck

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

BCA

Thank you Bill.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:42 AM | link to this | reply

Aba

Thanks so much. Yes some of them pronounce my name such. Such a complement coming from you. Thank you.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply

Kasperhoe

Dane? Well then it makes me feel a whole lot better that you found my poem ok - HCA is quite an enigma. Thank you.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

Naut

LOL, that's a relief Naut that I do have an Echo of HCA's style in this poem and yes I grew up too reading his fairy tales.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

Annicita

Thanks so much. Glad you liked.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:14 AM | link to this | reply

UKUSA

Hi, well you said quite a bit there lol. Thank you.

posted by shobana on November 20, 2016 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on November 19, 2016 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

Whether it sounds like him or not....I like it!

posted by Annicita on November 17, 2016 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana

Very interesting! I remember reading his fairy tales as a kid, and enjoyed them tremendously! And you certainly have an echo of that in your poem...

posted by Nautikos on November 17, 2016 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

H. C. Andersen? Well...

Sounds interesting in the ears of a Dane. 

I've been reading a lot of fairy tales and poems by Mr. Andersen, and I think your poem is a pretty nice shot. 

posted by kasperhoe on November 17, 2016 at 11:52 AM | link to this | reply

the echo-in threes- jumped out at me.As did feet, pondering the climb,

and perhaps, in inappropriate shoes, for that time! Yes, to set out, with all one's hopes and fears, and yet trust Nature to reveal its stories, its riddles, its power over young and old. (OK, I will stop now).Shalom Shobana: keep on keeping on Poet

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on November 17, 2016 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply

WoW Shobhana, that is how we Bengalees write and pronounce. Oh yes, wishing you all the luck you need. I found this style and subject brilliant! I am now going to give it a second read 

posted by anib on November 16, 2016 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery for a wonderful tale love. Good work.

posted by BC-A on November 16, 2016 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

You have a very sound imagination for poetry 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on November 16, 2016 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana

Interesting post and great poem love.

posted by WileyJohn on November 16, 2016 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

shobana

Great poem. Such an interesting topic for a course. Enjoy! He was, uhh, quite different, in my opinion. The Red Shoes is a story so frightening, I can't understand why he would want to write it. But I have not studied him in depth. Enlightened, perhaps you can share more with us.   

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 16, 2016 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Very good Shobana, so nice to be able to study and investigate such work. Be lucky.

posted by C_C_T on November 16, 2016 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful and what a fabulous course to study. Would love to be there with you.

posted by Kabu on November 16, 2016 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

I say that you have done a fine job writing like him...I enjoyed learning about him in third grade.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 16, 2016 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply