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Re: Re: Superb...
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posted by
teddypoet52
on January 7, 2017 at 2:05 PM
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"to dance to flames of our own choosing," - haunting lines. I shall read it
again ... lots in here to digest. thanks Poet K. Blessings from the SOURCE of All Amen
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on November 8, 2016 at 4:22 AM
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You have such a way with intense imagery no matter what the emotion evokes it seems magnified when I read your poems. Great job.
posted by
shobana
on November 7, 2016 at 4:16 AM
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mmmmm sounds like the pending election!
posted by
Annicita
on November 5, 2016 at 1:52 PM
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You are very good at the use of words 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 5, 2016 at 10:11 AM
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I love your use of intense imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 5, 2016 at 8:47 AM
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The explanation's in the poem love.
The Human-kind mantle is beat upon to the core of breast
heaving and dead
posted by
BC-A
on November 5, 2016 at 8:32 AM
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I cannot but say Kudos to a great poem with this stature. 
A very fine job, indeed!
posted by
anib
on November 4, 2016 at 10:13 PM
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Re: Katray2
Thank you so much, RPresta..
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2016 at 3:46 PM
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Re: Katray2
That is true, WileyFriend, thank you. Very nice to hear from you, hope you are doing great..
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2016 at 3:45 PM
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Yes indeed, Kabu. Mass Suicide is not painless, to me it is frusrating beyond belief, incredibly perplexing and enraging that the masses aren't involved in the choice, never have been, but I know that is by design..
Thank you for reading..
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2016 at 3:44 PM
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Thanks, CC. No, not a happy poem..
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2016 at 3:42 PM
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Re: Superb...
Thanks Ted..:) Drifting and dreaming..
posted by
Katray2
on November 4, 2016 at 3:41 PM
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Katray2
I like this so well I read it twice! The ending is especially resonant with me! It is written in a very highly creative manner and begs one to read more! Well done.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 4, 2016 at 1:34 PM
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Katray2
It all ends in heaven love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 4, 2016 at 12:58 PM
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depends who gets close to that red button.
posted by
Kabu
on November 4, 2016 at 12:52 PM
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Well entrenched in mystical values Kat. Not reassuringly attuned to happiness.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2016 at 12:43 PM
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Superb...
Hey snowflake
posted by
teddypoet52
on November 4, 2016 at 12:22 PM
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