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Shobana
A great poem - a song of Hope...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 31, 2016 at 10:26 AM
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Pendorin
Thanks so much. Glad you liked
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 10:05 PM
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FSI
Yes we do..
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 10:03 PM
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CCT
Thank you CC
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:59 PM
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Kabu
Ya that's and I think you did the right thing with the kids - they will always appreciate the value money somehow.
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:49 PM
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Wiley John
Thank you so much
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:46 PM
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BCA
thanks Bill, yes you are right
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:42 PM
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Annicita
Thank you Annicita. Glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:39 PM
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RPresta
Thanks so much, glad you liked RP
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:35 PM
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UKUSA
Shalom and thank you.
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:27 PM
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Aba
Thanks Aba - Yes she will be the shiniest one yet
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:19 PM
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Riversidepoet
Thank you so much. So cute your granddaughter is - precious indeed. God bless too.
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:16 PM
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KATRAY2
Indeed there is, thanks Katray
posted by
shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:10 PM
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Chuck
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shobana
on October 30, 2016 at 9:08 PM
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Nice poem
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 29, 2016 at 7:30 AM
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Beautifully profound, Shobana; I see a message within a message..
posted by
Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 2:51 PM
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how beautiful, from the mouths of babes, this made me smile, this little girl is much like my granddaughter, she will not leave church until she gives the pastor a hug, children are so wonderful, such is heaven made of, thanks for brightening my day, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 28, 2016 at 6:58 AM
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Shobs, my friend
You certainly do a great job of the feelings. Why, that li'l girl of six is, no doubt, going to become the shiniest star in the firmament.
posted by
anib
on October 27, 2016 at 9:22 PM
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well done telling of the difference between the haves n have nots
posted by
Annicita
on October 27, 2016 at 4:38 PM
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God has done it again & again: A slave became ambassador to Haiti in 1800s
Frederick Douglas. George Washington Carver, also a slave discovered over 100 uses for peanuts, gave the world peanut butter, because he said, "He was tired of seeing the poor starve when so much was given to us free by God." He never patented any of his 300 inventions. Could a rich man sacrifice such potential wealth? amen Amein
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on October 27, 2016 at 7:20 AM
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Kdep on keeping on, Sister in the LORD Jesus. Shalom, shalom
http://www.godvine.com/David-Phelps-and-His-Daughter-Sing-the-Most-Breathtaking-Duet-2960.html
posted by
NocrossJustchristmas
on October 26, 2016 at 11:49 PM
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And she grew up to be a big star...one way or another! I love this poem. For who knows? I have seen many who started with nothing have much. And some who started with much have nothing. In the end, what matters is what you have done in the middle of all that. Great work.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 26, 2016 at 8:15 PM
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The meek shall inherit the Kingdom of God.
posted by
BC-A
on October 26, 2016 at 3:07 PM
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Shobana
The real you shines through with the love in your poetry
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 26, 2016 at 1:34 PM
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For me the little child has already having her priorities correct. Actually, I was always glad that I never had enough money to ruin my children. They had plenty of everything but not as much as some.
posted by
Kabu
on October 26, 2016 at 7:25 AM
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Quite sweet Shobana I can imagine you as a child expressing those thoughts.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2016 at 7:10 AM
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We all have a great amount of potential within us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 26, 2016 at 6:42 AM
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To already question what she feels, is it better than riches or holdings and to seek clarity at six years old, what an asset to humanity...Amazing Poem!
posted by
pendorin
on October 26, 2016 at 6:31 AM
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