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RPresta
Thank you my friend
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:43 PM
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Naut
Thanks Naut, I'm glad it did
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:33 PM
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CCT
Yes I sure was CC
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:32 PM
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BCA
Thanks Bill.
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:31 PM
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FSI
Glad you liked
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:28 PM
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Riversidepoet
Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on October 20, 2016 at 10:25 PM
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The imagery is so picturesque. I can see it all, and in such a sweet way. A gentle poem.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 20, 2016 at 7:27 PM
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Shobana
This poem made me smile...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 20, 2016 at 12:25 PM
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Very good Shobana you have deciphered the little girls thoughts,well I suppose you were one once.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2016 at 11:10 AM
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Beautiful natural thoughts
posted by
BC-A
on October 20, 2016 at 10:00 AM
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I am loving the nature imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 20, 2016 at 10:00 AM
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this is great, enjoyed reading several times, I especially loved this line, "
The caretaker Rain maker was sleeping inside
his Chambers
thanks for sharing this, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 20, 2016 at 8:03 AM
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