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TAPS
A wonderful depiction of emotion in your poem, TAPS. I, too, have similar memories from behind the wheel.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM
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I totally agree with this. Even here with the love of my life we don't always see eye to eye and have to come together and work things out. Talking together is so important but that isn't always possible with some people. We all know that Wiley is special. he does make me want to be a better person.
posted by
Kabu
on October 2, 2016 at 9:36 AM
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TAPS
Very well done! Your poem evokes memories of similar moments on sad and dreary days...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 2, 2016 at 8:35 AM
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Oh, yeah! Been there.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 2, 2016 at 6:16 AM
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No one is perfect Taps. We may wish them to be, but first we must look at ourselves and wonder.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 2, 2016 at 5:40 AM
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I can quite understand the emotions of uncertainty in the poem TAPS but all is well.
posted by
shobana
on October 2, 2016 at 5:27 AM
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Your poem well-captures the valleys that of which love can have. There is hope, though, at the end.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 2, 2016 at 5:00 AM
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